« Reply #3 on: Monday 04 June 18 13:20 BST (UK) »
The transcription is weird too. I'm absolutely certain he wasn't a:
"Detective & Sorter Metal Sortts Heavy Worker" and I think his wife is called "Annie" not Dennie
Are you looking at Ancestry or FindMyPast? I read a different word for "detective" and one much more likely to fit with a metal sorter
Berks / Oxon: Eltham, Annetts, Wiltshire (surname not county), Hawkins, Pembroke, Partridge
Dorset / Hants: Derham, Stride, Purkiss, Sibley
Yorkshire: Pottage, Carr, Blackburn, Depledge
Sussex: Goodyer, Christopher, Trevatt
Lanark: Scott (soldier went to Jersey CI)
Jersey: Fowler, Huelin, Scott