I think that surprisingly the faces are well drawn (surprising because faces are often something that amateurs struggle with), but the proportions of the bodies, particularly the man's legs, are not so good.

It's as though the artist was running out of paper and had to foreshorten the bottom half of the figures as s/he drew to squeeze them onto the page.

It seems an unusual pose with the couple facing each other.
(Nice clean up and colour Carol
