Hi David,
As I have suggested, what might be the best way for all to see the death certificate's information would be for you to type the information from them.
Sending them just to me means I am the only person who can see them and remember, this is a great team site 
If you can just take time to look at each heading and type word for word what is under it, that might help. You may not post entire documents on the public board for reasons of copyright.
Sue
Hi Sue, please excuse delay!
THIRD SCHEDULE
DEATHS in the District of Melbourne East in the State of Victoria
N0. (1) 362 (stamped) and below this U.R. (stamped)
When and where Died. (2) 27th September 1916 (written) Melbourne Hospital Gipps Ward City of Melbourne County of Bourke (stamped) 131Grattan Street St Kilda (written)
Name and Surname, Rank or Profession (3) Thomas Power, line, accountant (all written)
Sex and Age (4) male, 82 years (all written)
Cause of death etc (5) NOT EASY TO DECIPHER
Name and Surname of Father and Mother etc (6) unknown (written)
Signature, Description and Residence of Informant (7) H J Richardson (?) Clerk Authorized Agent Melbourne Hospital (all written)
Signature of Registrar etc (

E H Clarke 29th September 1916 (written) Melbourne East (stamped)
When and where buried etc (9) 29th September 1916 Fawkner Cemetery H J Keenan (all written)
Name and religion of Minister or name of witnesses of Burial (10) line, C R Heath, line, H V Kelly
When born and how long in the Australian States, stating which (11) Cork Ireland 40 years in Victoria (all written)
IF DECEASED WAS MARRIED
(1) where, and at what (2) age and to (3) whom (12) Ballarat Victoria, unknown, Kate O'Brien (all written)
Issue in order of Birth, their Names and Ages. (13) one male dead William 8/12, line. (all written)
Hope this makes sense! Regards David
Note I doubt 40years in Victoria is correct as he married Kate in 1868.