As you say the 1851 is difficult to make out but to me it looks like.
Elijah Hawley 64, Gardener, b Cheshire
Ann 69, b Ashton Lancs
Louisa 29, b Cheshire
Robt S 19, ? Joiner, b Dukinfield Cheshire
What do you think of this entry for 1841?
HO107/109/7
South Side Astley Street, Dukinfield
Elijah Hawley 51, Ag Lab
Ann 55
Alice 28, Cotton Weaver
Abram 20, Whitesmith
Louisa 15. Cotton Weaver
Edward 15, Carpenter
Mary 15, Loom Weaver
Robert 10
All born in county.
Sheila